(Spoiler Warning)So experiments were being done on Chloe and Gwen... And what they decided to destroy the records in the middle of the main character's escape? At that point they would have had no reason to know that Gwen or Chloe was with him Why would they have been experimenting on their own higher ranked members?
I believe the thought was they were just wiping all the data as the facility was being abandoned/evacuated, so nobody could just waltz in and figure out all their secrets. I got no clue about the second part tho
I sort of get that but let's be honest If you're in the middle of a building and you're hearing screams of terror guns being fired and someone yelling about some beast are you really going to sit back and say you know what I think I need to erase the data It sounds like this facility is compromised?... Or are you going to be more inclined to just get out of there as quickly as possible so that whatever is loose doesn't kill you too?
As another prime example... Of what I mean by what's the point of having a menu that gives us supposed access to our powers.
oh yeah, no need to use shatter when surrounded by the organization and Morgana... Because I would hate to tip off the organization or the fae that I have power?
Oh and let's not forget again overwhelmly surrounded it's still not a great idea that summon something that would easily take every last one of them out AKA the "beast"
Characters like Veronica, Lily, Madison Go into hiding when they are pregnant stating basically they wouldn't be able to explain how they are pregnant... However Jessica when she is pregnant still goes to work despite the fact that she would literally be having a member of the organization that studies and is obsessed with unusual phenomena right there literally in her office with her.... Have I missed some logical leap wear it's okay for a headmistress to not go to school because being pregnant would be weird but working at a real estate agency and the presence of an agent of an organization that's after magical creatures and/or circumstances is perfectly fine or is this an oversight that should have been corrected?
I have noticed that almost every one of my comments here have received at least a few down votes. I think everyone that has down voted meo misunderstand..... The reason behind my post here showing what I consider issues with the game It said that the creator of the game can look over them and perhaps improve upon the game If I did not like the game I wouldn't play it... Am I criticisms every last one of them would be scathing and saying things with the words such as incompetent or moronic That's not the case there's only been maybe three posts where I ask what was being thought how stupid is something is And in those cases it was situations where something made absolutely no sense at all, So for those of you that think I'm hating on this game that's not what this is This is me trying to get feedback so that maybe it'll be even better I've done the same thing for sprinting cucumber on his game a looping history and now I'm actually a tester for his builds.
As another example in this game that I feel could use improvement is the fact that in the beginning of the game the investigations you got to follow up on the leads who got to get on the internet talk to people associate and learn... Later on in the game it became lazy Go to Grandpa Have Grandpa tell you what to do next It would have been better in my opinion to continue being able to do research to investigate to actually feel like you're gaining these answers for yourself I mean after all what's the purpose of being told by not only the artifact but by your gramps that you need to come up with your own answers If Gramps is just going to come right out and tell you oh yeah you need to go here and you need to do this and you need to talk to that person? It went from the creator seemingly respecting the fact that a person's intelligent enough to figure things out for their own to having to be guided by their nose or their handheld to get to the proper solution... Now everyone feels that they're that naive or stupid that they have to have that guidance then there should be a checkbox where you can put please guide me to make it easier for them but why take what was a good mechanic in the game and basically dumb it down especially mid game for no apparent reason at all?
Your "feedback" can be sent in message to the game creator, or you can go to the discord and put your spoilers and criticisms there, instead of on a public forum here... You can even write a review for the game which will ALSO reach the author, as well as anyone that happens to follow your profile on Itch. We get it- you don't approve of (apparently most of) the game. Stop playing, and move on, if that is the case. You sound as though you believe you could make a better game; you're more than welcome to try. In the meantime, maybe try not to bash literally years of someone's hard work -- the condescending tone isn't helping your argument that the criticism is meant as friendly or constructive. Have the kind of day you deserve.
You mentioned Discord? Where's the link for that on itch.io? Because I don't see it If I had I would have clicked there first. Also I don't see the option to directly message the developer... it's possible I'm missing something because by frankly I don't know too much about this platform That being the case the only way I know to give information is to use the comment section provided.For your information, some developers actually appreciate being made aware of inconsistencies errors typos etc In fact to that extent I have been working with and on a game for a different developer from a previous beta build then a different alpha build and the now current beta build so your viewpoint is moot If the developer themselves did not wish me to speak They have the option of banning me from commenting or replying thank you for your input it's not needed, furthermore it is thanks to me doing very much the same as I'm doing here that the other developer accepted my offer of help when I directly contacted them They had noted my feedback said it was much appreciated and that if I had responded again they had been planning to reach out to me. Also if I disliked the game I wouldn't bother to play it let alone try to give it pointers where it could be improved I would have just reviewed it as trash and moved on... You claimed it I seem to have a problem with the majority of the game I guarantee you the game itself is a lot more than 20 scenes. So unless you're implying that this game is much shorter than it actually is You're most of comment was highly exaggerated.
You left 36 different post... all worded much like this one; rudely. If you post a review of the game (upper right hand corner of your screen, along with other options like "add to collection", etc.) you can "rate and review', which can be read by the developer, as well as anyone that follows your profile. You're just being rude and cruel at this point... it looks more like you're trying to chase possible interested parties off, more than anything else. Beyond that, visiting the subscribestar page (possibly contributing more than just nasty comments if you can spare $2 a month or more) guarantees you'll find a Discord link, where you stand a good chance of talking to the Arcadean himself. Honestly, you think you know enough about this to comment about their game design, but you can't figure out how to effectively reach authors you're claiming to try to help? I've read the comments-- there was NOTHING polite or constructive-- all snark and sarcasm. Did you suppose the dev never responded because you didn't bash him enough? I've played through this game four times now, I'm a patron, and I'm in regular contact with his community in Discord-- this is NOT how you go about critiquing a game. 36 separate comments-- not including this one. Not one response from the dev... take a hint.
First of all if it was and I quote you and being rude I would have said something along the lines of this is the worst piece of dung I have ever had the displeasure of playing... At no point did I say Anything even remotely scathing toward this game I did say I don't understand what the developer was thinking or I don't know why they would do something that makes no sense and that is a logical conclusion when for an example your supposed to be finding out where Lyx is hiding and you get traces from locations that have nothing to do with the actual last place you would have left from. All of that said quite frankly it's none of your business what I say none of you it's the developer has issue with what I say They have every right to have my comments deleted, to have me band from sending comments in the first place, And I imagine a way to directly report to itch.io about my conduct... Considering I'm still able to leave comments, I'm not received any emails from itch.io stating a developer has raised issues with your conduct I have to assume that either a this person hasn't gotten around to reading my comments, The person isn't bothered by my comments, who are the persons just too busy to even visit the comment section. Which considering there have been at least a few people asking is the project still going and the developer has not, directly responded yeah I'm still working on the game indicates to me that the latter is the most probable
First of all: punctuation. I almost had a stroke reading that. Second of all: Your interpretation of your comments is not the Only interpretation, and you've been - A) less than kind- whether you realize it or not, your comments are nearly ALL negative. B) sarcastic- I could quote a few, here, but you imply stupidity several times. C) patronizing- 'Developers should be thanking me for my extremely valuable opinion-- I know so much more than them about this!'** D) relentless- 35+ posts over just a few days; one would almost think you've nothing else better to do... E) uninformed- You've personally NO idea where this game is actually going, what future plans are, etc. F) unrealistic- Expecting others act as you do, and further expecting more realism in a fantasy anime harem AVN. ** (this is not a direct quote, but definitely how you come across-- extremely patronizing, self righteous, self important, etc.) You have the means to contact the developer, now, and yet you continue here. It seems to put a shadow of untruth to your claimed intent.
You forgot one of the options they have: Ignoring. It's easy: you click on their profile, and block it. Poof. No more comments. Some people do that, especially when the posts are multiple AND negative. But... thirty-something posts (and more than a week) later, surely it must be because they're too busy! Surely they would be simply dying to talk to someone that has practically spammed the comments with post after post of complaints and snark directed at something they've poured their heart and soul in for the past few years. Obviously. How could they not see you only want to help them? Maybe come over for afternoon tea, and write it for them? Sarcasm aside: if you REALLY want to help, and have input, follow the proper channels. Join the Subscribestar page, and the Discord, and try your luck there. Otherwise, the game IS free, and it is more than a little ungrateful to complain about something you got without paying a dime.
Thank you for your assistance I appreciate your help, though generally speaking, For the record I do understand that You seem to think that I deserve to have anything other than a good day.
Are other languages planned for this game, and will Russian be included? Please forgive me if I’m posting in the wrong place or if everyone keeps asking this
yes, in the discord of the author you can find provisional translations.
i read in same place, discord probably, another language will be include after crear the main hisstory, may be in beta releases (actually are in alpha versions)
"This is as far as I can go" ... Character used shatter, which completely strips away their personality and their willpower He ordered that the rinkos keep everyone out of the room... So what's stopping him from going further?
Emma cowgirl, correct me if I'm wrong... According to the game as long as her feet are not on the ground her elemental weight does not kick in.... Which is why when she jumps up and wraps her legs around the main character at the club where she's singing he doesn't immediately end up crushed under her weight... If that's the case why would her mounting him cowgirl style on a bed allow her elemental weight to kick in? Furthermore I have everything maxed out (as far as you can with the shard still embedded I'm assuming there's a way to get it out since there is a shard icon at the top of the last two and all of the rows and a little padlock at the bottom) So even if she did have her full elemental weight he has the ability right now to handle almost a ton of weight at the gym but he can't handle her?
It can't develop with holes. Those holes will get bigger and bigger until your pants quit pantsing. So just fixing them will take no time and will make a good floor when you build your story and will add new features like samohtsirrom1 posts.
Yea, i'm not saying he's wrong, i see these holes too, but i just don't care that much bout silly porn game. I understand that making a game is a lot of work, it's hard to keep everything top lvl, especially when updates were quite often (back then), and we are getting this piece of work for free to enjoy. Maybe i assumed that it will be fixed later, or it has meaning for future plot, or maybe dev just want to say, that u can't touch Emma now, wait for story to unfold.
It’s fine I just prefer wasting my time in a more meaningful way. Maybe that’s why I don’t enjoy games with glaring flaws, weak stories, or half-baked execution. Making games isn’t hard. If you can develop one, writing a story should be the easy part, like saying if you can run then you can walk to a store easily. Some people don’t mind imperfections, but for me, a game has to be fully good to be worth my time. Porn games, in particular, live and die by their art and storytelling. If one aspect is weak, the game suffers. If both are decent, it’s at least somewhat enjoyable. Some players prioritize art, others care about story, I’m the latter. Why porn games? Because they often have fewer limits.
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You're very wrong if you think creating a game is easy. First, it's a creative process built progressively. It's not just about telling a story, it's about matching it with a bunch of things that always fail, that are never ready on time, and if you're not making enough money to live off of it, it's painful not being able to dedicate as much time to it as you'd like.
I understand that you don't want to see a poorly constructed story or one that leaves too many strange plot holes, but maybe you're not taking something very important into account, and that is: "the game is in alpha state."
These are pre-release versions that tell you from the beginning that it's not ready for final consumption.
I've been following the game since version 0.20.2, and I was surprised by how complete and complex all the systems were for such an early version. I've been watching it evolve with each version. Sprite changes, dialogue changes, interface changes, re-creating all scenes due to rendering issues, among other changes that add a lot or a little.
For now, just wait for the more polished versions. The author is trying to finish the main story before adjusting the side stories and correcting plot inconsistencies.
The dev isn’t the smartest man you could find. That was a good comment to see, I like seeing someone who isn’t just another brainwashed dummy.
Whoever downvoted you is just part of the same brainwashed crowd, so ignore them.
personally I like to play a complete game from story to art to gameplay to etc.. and seeing someone actually use their brain was a good change from the normal comments about people who can't play a game.
Survey on the second floor.. Once you unlocked the nude uniform Why did you make it where he cannot use a low level Aura ability when doing a uniform check? And perhaps you can get laid?
Quite Girl (school library)... She isn't human, no way she can be, can't use any abilities on her in the library, Aura doesn't seem to effect her at all (she runs out of a room when you use it and try picking her, even Max authority at the college has no effect on her)
Well that's annoying, I used the keyword at the Nexus clap (because I was thinking if whistle was then perhaps clap, snap, hum, sing, yell, moan) could also possibly be ones So I tried each of them got the whole nope sorry must not be a keyword message...only For the story to tell me the clap is one so apparently even if you can guess or figure out a keyword until it's the time in the story that it's supposed to be used it does you no good... Which brings up the question why they didn't just simply make it were you tap the button and if a "key" has been learned You can just tap the one you want versus having to type it in. Also would it hurt to make some of the buttons bigger like the back button maybe? I found it's very hard to cycle back at least on an Android device because of how small the button is more times than on you end up moving forward You have to be very very careful very very precise and push very very slowly otherwise there's a chance that yes it'll go back once but it'll immediately jump forward because the button doesn't reload fast enough.
So let me get this straight despite it literally just saying that I figured out the keywords for her... I can't use this ability unless I figure out the keywords? So shouldn't this ability be usable? Yet another reason why I say it's pointless to get people the ability to supposedly use a power if they're not actually able to ever use the power unless it's story driven.
This tight here is actually one of the stupidest things I've read during this game He describes them as basically mindless dolls prior to using his ability, Yet he is concerned that somehow they may overwhelm his power that has easily overwhelmed people with actual personalities? So these two have the potential to be as much of a liability as a human like Lily or more so? Seriously they're going to overwhelm his power and break free despite already being basically mindless puppets?
I believe he's concerned that Luna's control over them could surpass his own. For example, as far as I can recall, he can't use control on anyone under the control of the Eldritch.
So... Command (I get why this might not work since it's supposedly does not work on magical creatures, despite the fact that the original version of it control did work on pixie which is obviously a magical creature) It doesn't explain why magic suppression doesn't work... After all if they Cupid is trying to use love "MAGIC" And you suppress it obviously it won't be able to affect you but again due to it not being at the point of the story where it might automatically kick in I'm not allowed to, So what's the purpose of even having the ability to click and use powers at will?
I understand the fact that it's because of how I had the room decorated that triggered this event However it would have been nice if you would have still limited it to the actual date AKA October the 31st... However that said my bigger criticism is the fact that at this point I have the ability to make pixie human size meaning I could have easily used that turn her humanized and they would have just thought it was a pixie costume... In which case why would I need to go get her a costume?
Organization members come to visit , When I have Emma, Hana and Ami inside However I do not have the option of shattering them both... I do not have any idea how they could possibly miss an entire wing separated from the rest of the house especially containing at least two fae... And if they're smart I'm pretty sure they can determine the half human half elemental such as Emma
eso lo han explicado. no, ellos no pueden identificar facilmente a los fey a menos que sean evidentemente no-humanos. y ellos suelen estar ocultos. incluso a cupido no pudieron encontrarla aunque sabian en donde estaban.
increiblemente la organizacion no es buena encontrandolos, e incluso dudo que sean buenos en capturarlos.
Here is another example of why I have a problem with this... Hidden voices, used when the chief officially offers you a place in the familySo you're saying that at this pivotal moment he's not thinking you know I hope he buys this? Or for the greater good? Or maybe even I think he could help us... It makes absolutely no sense that in a moment where a person is either legitimately making an offer or is planning subterfuge that they're not actually thinking about what they're actually doing...
I know this game has been out for a while I know you update this game and I thank you for that I really do but seriously I feel there are lots The places that you should have reevaluated during your updates and this is a glaring example Oh look a Minotaur is trying to punch my face in... Surely I should hold back my most devastating attack because this is obviously not something where a last ditch effort would be beneficial???? I mean seriously wtf? A Minotaur trying to punch you in the face and kill you, it's still not enough of a perilous situation to consider shatter as a viable solution? That's just lazy writing.
Okay this criticism I..... Is absolutely necessary, What was going through your mind during this? Did you completely lose all sense of reality during the making of this particular bit?
Not only is my martial arts maxed out (as far as they allow with the locks for the last two due to the crystal) But as is my strength... This character is able to outmatch Ninja as far as speed and yet he is being overwhelmed by the speed of a bulky muscular Minotaur? I honestly don't see how a Minotaur especially one thick with muscle is going to be faster than a ninja especially one that is thin and lithe... As if that wasn't bad enough "there is no reason to use ENDURE" If a physical fight with a freaking Minotaur is not reason enough to use endure... What could possibly be the use of it? Even if it's activated at some point story-wise automatically... What is the whole point of offering people and I quote "access to your powers whenever" If in a situation where it would actually fit it cannot be utilized earlier than the story would dictate? Because quite frankly there have been times in this game where I've known the solution such as awaken, endure, hidden voices... And yet none of those have been an option. And that leads me to another criticism... We have an ability that supposed to tell us the inner thoughts of the people we are dealing with (perhaps even who knows their desires???) However that ability never does anything except when the story dictates otherwise it's muffled, or Not particularly thinking about anything... I think it would make the upmost logical conclusion to allow people to use hidden voices whenever they want to if they don't want to wait for an obscene amount of time and find out a character's desires so that they can use awaken. Which brings me to a final criticism (for now) The main character has the potential ability to use shatter which has no prerequisite as far as having figured out anything about the character in question So why if one tries to use it does the game say oh no I don't think I should do that I mean what's the point of telling us we can be a villain if we won't indiscriminately use our abilities just because?
Well it's story locked, first requisite is you have to have an affection level of 4, next you have to get to the point of the game where your insight has been risen and "energies" aligned.
Okay so I think I am at the end of Chapter 2 (Act 2, part 2?) and I was curious if there is anything that you can miss side quest, collectable or cutscene wise before entering the church? For example I still have the college side-quest to finish and I am missing a scene with the Rinkos (and the fourth Asteria one but I bet I missed that one in her story line).
Oh probably already mentioned somewhere below but, the menus need some work. Backing out of one of the my notes subpages should take you back to the my notes page not the game (or make it act like the settings menu or just line each along the top). Also I can't seem to leave the game to the main menu, only quit.
What gives? I can't talk yo the Lamia deapite having the following stats and wait until it was speaking and trying the hidden voices ability.. Further you might want to change the design of this page ever so slightly Right now the comments available on Windows, Android, macOS or Linux covers part of the field where a person would input their comment at least on the mobile version of the browser
I don't get this... We are told that failure means death, she summons a group of horny fairies to attack the MC... However if you try to use endure so you can actuallyallow them to get their freak on It says you're using a power that couldn't help you I rather take that power could help you and set it forces you to use a different power I honestly think it should have been optional which way you wanted to go by which power you picked, honestly I feel four different powers, could have been effectively used here against the bomb issue... Shatter (when her mind is shattered demand the correct wire to disarm the bomb), command (command her to tell which wire), endure, (place it around Lyx And let the bombs blow knowing it will protect her), And of course the one that is scripted to work correctly (No spoilers but if you're at this point I think it's fairly obvious what they want you to do)
More a question than a comment, at the pole dancing is it actually possible to get them naked but so far the farthest my character has asked even Chloe the one with shattered in effect to go is topless
MC was told that none of his powers would work on the fae.. his powers do work on the Fae, disregarding that just for the moment He's being told that his powers which originally can even work on the Fae cannot work on the Fae or anyone else who has been trained to resist them... (how would anyone in the entire world have had training to resist his brand new abilities to control people with a single word????? At most I can think of only 24 people before him that have that ability and I'm pretty sure that organization had not captured or studied all 24 of them otherwise I doubt they would be having any issue with him now). And I have noticed this throughout every time you try to listen to someone's thoughts 90% of the time If not higher they're not thinking anything in particular... despite the fact that obviously they are thinking because they're engaging in a conversation And last time I checked the majority of people do not empty headedly Just talk to someone in a coherent manner without thinking anything of what they're wanting to say, And don't get me started on control Oh sorry awaken now... prior to gaining awaken he was able to use his powers on people without knowing any of their desires but suddenly he needs to know them in order to use his power? It seems to me that each of these "upgrades" do nothing but limit him even more.
I will admit I was a bit disappointed that I could not present pixie to Morgana while she was pregnant I would have loved to have seen morgana's reaction especially with pixie obviously impregnated and bragging how she was wrong that someone can love her and more than that that she can be with him.
after MC was claimed as a forfit and made a member of her tribe ... And having been confessed to. Yet for some reason it's still not enough to get weight training? also what's up with the this? I mean after the first arm wrestling competition, she approaches her character starts carrying you off and says that as the winner she gets a forfeit from a member of her tribe and you say but I'm not a member of and she says yes you are... However here she says you're not?
For the love of wverything... Arm wrestling... Arm in pain.... "There's nothing to endure here"..... REALLY? I feel that entire competition He should have had the option of using endure the entire time
characters most probably don't consider virgins Gwen (Due to her having a fiance, It is quite possible that she was the type that believed in no sex before marriage, Which is why she had hoped or a big strong man to be forceful with her), Lily (because she had a boyfriend, However the boyfriend even Tells the MC don't bother she's frigid meaning she never had sex with him outright and refused to, probably due to her obsession with maintaining her father's bar), Qarinah (due to her very nature of being a "Dream succubus", despite this fact no matter how many times she has had sex in a dream I sincerely doubt she interacted with humans or pretty much any species face to face generally speaking That being the case her physical body is most likely a virgins, The question becomes is a dream body able to physically impact a physical body as in if and a dream you're a female and you have your vagina penetrated does it tear your hymen in the real world The answer is no it doesn't, And to be honest there are a number of times that she tries to do nothing more than tease the main character, Only for him to Take over the dream and have sex with her anyway... In fact the very first time this happens is when he has sex with her she had teased him was about to leave and he's like you're not getting away... Since no one else has a kind of control over a dream there's every chance and likelihood that whenever anything got really close to sex she would just end the dream)
The first bit of the description says you are the hero or villain. You are the villain of this story. You are mind controlling all the ladies and to me, that falls under the purview of evil. DOesnt matter whether its Awaken or Shatter, you are mind controlling everyone so none of them are actually their true selves at all. One day i may choose to do nothing ut evil shit because its more fun than being a weak goody two shoes loser who cant do anything like 99%v of all hentai VN protags.
On a lighter note though, i wish the option to make every girl in the game, major or otherwise, go full nude as an outfit choice. Especially lil Pixie as im of the opinion that fairies should be completely nude instead of clothed.
On that note, can we maybe get the option sometime to get rid of the chains and such Pixie always has?
I agree it would be completely awesome if every female character in the game that you end up interacting with could be told hey you have to be naked all the time. No I must admit I do find something very confusing in the school where you can enforce a nudity outfit Veronica is still concerned that someone might catch you two going at it.
Very much a cool idea, but I'd appreciate if the intro was a bit slower, so we can get used to the characters more before twists happen. Makes the emotional impact more meaningful.
Also higher resolution on the images would do wonders
I think it's just more annoying than loud... If you really don't want to hear it and you can always just turn down the volume of your phone but then that means you miss other sound effects and vocals during the singing with Emma...
Can anyone help me figure out how to back up my save file? Every time I need to update the game, I have to uninstall the previous version and install the latest one, which causes me to lose all my progress. I can’t access the save file normally using ZArchiver—it either says "Access denied" or shows "Copy completed with errors."
I’ve already tried using Shizuku, but it didn’t work. Some games store their save files in the Documents folder, which makes backup easier. Will this game eventually support that kind of storage system in the future?
Unfortunately your problem isn't the game it's the fact that Android updated their operating system, They have effectively sandboxed each and every app on the phone to make sure they cannot directly interact with each other The only way at this point of time to have the functionality you're speaking of is either have the game developer put into the game the ability to export the save which Ren'py can and does support, try updating instead of uninstalling, or and I really cannot advise this one root your phone.
Okay I'm not sure if anyone has pointed this out before but what were you thinking? Emma, music talent agent, pins her up against the wall and she can't get away? She literally toppled a freaking tree just by accidentally leaning into it but she couldn't push away a human being on her own? Had to have the main character save her? "I just knew you would save me" For clarification yes she says she's half human half elemental and unless she's touching the ground she doesn't weigh that much, However when she was in her apartment stumbling loud crashes were heard from her hitting into the walls and I'm pretty sure if a normal human especially a female that looks as small as she is was to hit into a wall there wouldn't be loud crashes... Meaning any solid ground whether it's the actual literal earth or the concrete floor or even a wood patio would be considered ground.
Also what is up with Lily? I ask her to wear the Casino outfit and when I go in she is, but when I talked to her about working she isn't she's wearing her normal outfit
They werent thinking. I personally woudl rathe rthe girls be capable of saving themselves. I dont care for damsels in distress. Makes the girls look pathetic and weak. I would rathe rthe girls be allowed to be strong, properly so.
If Emma can knock down a tree by leaning onto it, aint no man ever gonna pin her to anyhting. One flick and that person would be splattered all over the walls.
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For a paralyzed girl Gwen seems to do very well at blow jobs, and sitting up afterwards
Tried to save Kana, planned to get Both meters down and break Maven... She ended up seducing my character ...
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Warning)So experiments were being done on Chloe and Gwen... And what they decided to destroy the records in the middle of the main character's escape? At that point they would have had no reason to know that Gwen or Chloe was with him Why would they have been experimenting on their own higher ranked members?
I believe the thought was they were just wiping all the data as the facility was being abandoned/evacuated, so nobody could just waltz in and figure out all their secrets. I got no clue about the second part tho
I sort of get that but let's be honest If you're in the middle of a building and you're hearing screams of terror guns being fired and someone yelling about some beast are you really going to sit back and say you know what I think I need to erase the data It sounds like this facility is compromised?... Or are you going to be more inclined to just get out of there as quickly as possible so that whatever is loose doesn't kill you too?
As another prime example... Of what I mean by what's the point of having a menu that gives us supposed access to our powers.
Oh and let's not forget again overwhelmly surrounded it's still not a great idea that summon something that would easily take every last one of them out AKA the "beast"
Characters like Veronica, Lily, Madison Go into hiding when they are pregnant stating basically they wouldn't be able to explain how they are pregnant... However Jessica when she is pregnant still goes to work despite the fact that she would literally be having a member of the organization that studies and is obsessed with unusual phenomena right there literally in her office with her.... Have I missed some logical leap wear it's okay for a headmistress to not go to school because being pregnant would be weird but working at a real estate agency and the presence of an agent of an organization that's after magical creatures and/or circumstances is perfectly fine or is this an oversight that should have been corrected?
I have noticed that almost every one of my comments here have received at least a few down votes. I think everyone that has down voted meo misunderstand..... The reason behind my post here showing what I consider issues with the game It said that the creator of the game can look over them and perhaps improve upon the game If I did not like the game I wouldn't play it... Am I criticisms every last one of them would be scathing and saying things with the words such as incompetent or moronic That's not the case there's only been maybe three posts where I ask what was being thought how stupid is something is And in those cases it was situations where something made absolutely no sense at all, So for those of you that think I'm hating on this game that's not what this is This is me trying to get feedback so that maybe it'll be even better I've done the same thing for sprinting cucumber on his game a looping history and now I'm actually a tester for his builds.
As another example in this game that I feel could use improvement is the fact that in the beginning of the game the investigations you got to follow up on the leads who got to get on the internet talk to people associate and learn... Later on in the game it became lazy Go to Grandpa Have Grandpa tell you what to do next It would have been better in my opinion to continue being able to do research to investigate to actually feel like you're gaining these answers for yourself I mean after all what's the purpose of being told by not only the artifact but by your gramps that you need to come up with your own answers If Gramps is just going to come right out and tell you oh yeah you need to go here and you need to do this and you need to talk to that person? It went from the creator seemingly respecting the fact that a person's intelligent enough to figure things out for their own to having to be guided by their nose or their handheld to get to the proper solution... Now everyone feels that they're that naive or stupid that they have to have that guidance then there should be a checkbox where you can put please guide me to make it easier for them but why take what was a good mechanic in the game and basically dumb it down especially mid game for no apparent reason at all?
Your "feedback" can be sent in message to the game creator, or you can go to the discord and put your spoilers and criticisms there, instead of on a public forum here... You can even write a review for the game which will ALSO reach the author, as well as anyone that happens to follow your profile on Itch. We get it- you don't approve of (apparently most of) the game. Stop playing, and move on, if that is the case. You sound as though you believe you could make a better game; you're more than welcome to try. In the meantime, maybe try not to bash literally years of someone's hard work -- the condescending tone isn't helping your argument that the criticism is meant as friendly or constructive. Have the kind of day you deserve.
You left 36 different post... all worded much like this one; rudely. If you post a review of the game (upper right hand corner of your screen, along with other options like "add to collection", etc.) you can "rate and review', which can be read by the developer, as well as anyone that follows your profile. You're just being rude and cruel at this point... it looks more like you're trying to chase possible interested parties off, more than anything else. Beyond that, visiting the subscribestar page (possibly contributing more than just nasty comments if you can spare $2 a month or more) guarantees you'll find a Discord link, where you stand a good chance of talking to the Arcadean himself. Honestly, you think you know enough about this to comment about their game design, but you can't figure out how to effectively reach authors you're claiming to try to help? I've read the comments-- there was NOTHING polite or constructive-- all snark and sarcasm. Did you suppose the dev never responded because you didn't bash him enough? I've played through this game four times now, I'm a patron, and I'm in regular contact with his community in Discord-- this is NOT how you go about critiquing a game. 36 separate comments-- not including this one. Not one response from the dev... take a hint.
First of all if it was and I quote you and being rude I would have said something along the lines of this is the worst piece of dung I have ever had the displeasure of playing... At no point did I say Anything even remotely scathing toward this game I did say I don't understand what the developer was thinking or I don't know why they would do something that makes no sense and that is a logical conclusion when for an example your supposed to be finding out where Lyx is hiding and you get traces from locations that have nothing to do with the actual last place you would have left from. All of that said quite frankly it's none of your business what I say none of you it's the developer has issue with what I say They have every right to have my comments deleted, to have me band from sending comments in the first place, And I imagine a way to directly report to itch.io about my conduct... Considering I'm still able to leave comments, I'm not received any emails from itch.io stating a developer has raised issues with your conduct I have to assume that either a this person hasn't gotten around to reading my comments, The person isn't bothered by my comments, who are the persons just too busy to even visit the comment section. Which considering there have been at least a few people asking is the project still going and the developer has not, directly responded yeah I'm still working on the game indicates to me that the latter is the most probable
First of all: punctuation. I almost had a stroke reading that. Second of all: Your interpretation of your comments is not the Only interpretation, and you've been -
A) less than kind- whether you realize it or not, your comments are nearly ALL negative.
B) sarcastic- I could quote a few, here, but you imply stupidity several times.
C) patronizing- 'Developers should be thanking me for my extremely valuable opinion-- I know so much more than them about this!'**
D) relentless- 35+ posts over just a few days; one would almost think you've nothing else better to do...
E) uninformed- You've personally NO idea where this game is actually going, what future plans are, etc.
F) unrealistic- Expecting others act as you do, and further expecting more realism in a fantasy anime harem AVN.
** (this is not a direct quote, but definitely how you come across-- extremely patronizing, self righteous, self important, etc.)
You have the means to contact the developer, now, and yet you continue here. It seems to put a shadow of untruth to your claimed intent.
You forgot one of the options they have: Ignoring. It's easy: you click on their profile, and block it. Poof. No more comments. Some people do that, especially when the posts are multiple AND negative. But... thirty-something posts (and more than a week) later, surely it must be because they're too busy! Surely they would be simply dying to talk to someone that has practically spammed the comments with post after post of complaints and snark directed at something they've poured their heart and soul in for the past few years. Obviously. How could they not see you only want to help them? Maybe come over for afternoon tea, and write it for them?
Sarcasm aside: if you REALLY want to help, and have input, follow the proper channels. Join the Subscribestar page, and the Discord, and try your luck there. Otherwise, the game IS free, and it is more than a little ungrateful to complain about something you got without paying a dime.
There you go. Next time, try viewing the PC version of the site on your phone. Again, have a day you deserve.
Thank you for your assistance I appreciate your help, though generally speaking, For the record I do understand that You seem to think that I deserve to have anything other than a good day.
Se incluirá el español en el juego?
segun lo dicho por el creador, si incluiran el idioma español de manera nativa, sin embargo por ahora eso no es algo que tenga prioridad.
aun asi en el discord del creador puedes encontrar traducciones, no solo en español muy buenas hechas por fans que estan apoyando al proyecto.
Are other languages planned for this game, and will Russian be included? Please forgive me if I’m posting in the wrong place or if everyone keeps asking this
yes, in the discord of the author you can find provisional translations.
i read in same place, discord probably, another language will be include after crear the main hisstory, may be in beta releases (actually are in alpha versions)
"This is as far as I can go" ... Character used shatter, which completely strips away their personality and their willpower He ordered that the rinkos keep everyone out of the room... So what's stopping him from going further?
Emma cowgirl, correct me if I'm wrong... According to the game as long as her feet are not on the ground her elemental weight does not kick in.... Which is why when she jumps up and wraps her legs around the main character at the club where she's singing he doesn't immediately end up crushed under her weight... If that's the case why would her mounting him cowgirl style on a bed allow her elemental weight to kick in? Furthermore I have everything maxed out (as far as you can with the shard still embedded I'm assuming there's a way to get it out since there is a shard icon at the top of the last two and all of the rows and a little padlock at the bottom) So even if she did have her full elemental weight he has the ability right now to handle almost a ton of weight at the gym but he can't handle her?
Plot armor or whatever... man, let the story develop!
It can't develop with holes. Those holes will get bigger and bigger until your pants quit pantsing. So just fixing them will take no time and will make a good floor when you build your story and will add new features like samohtsirrom1 posts.
Yea, i'm not saying he's wrong, i see these holes too, but i just don't care that much bout silly porn game. I understand that making a game is a lot of work, it's hard to keep everything top lvl, especially when updates were quite often (back then), and we are getting this piece of work for free to enjoy. Maybe i assumed that it will be fixed later, or it has meaning for future plot, or maybe dev just want to say, that u can't touch Emma now, wait for story to unfold.
It’s fine I just prefer wasting my time in a more meaningful way. Maybe that’s why I don’t enjoy games with glaring flaws, weak stories, or half-baked execution. Making games isn’t hard. If you can develop one, writing a story should be the easy part, like saying if you can run then you can walk to a store easily. Some people don’t mind imperfections, but for me, a game has to be fully good to be worth my time. Porn games, in particular, live and die by their art and storytelling. If one aspect is weak, the game suffers. If both are decent, it’s at least somewhat enjoyable. Some players prioritize art, others care about story, I’m the latter. Why porn games? Because they often have fewer limits.
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You're very wrong if you think creating a game is easy. First, it's a creative process built progressively. It's not just about telling a story, it's about matching it with a bunch of things that always fail, that are never ready on time, and if you're not making enough money to live off of it, it's painful not being able to dedicate as much time to it as you'd like.
I understand that you don't want to see a poorly constructed story or one that leaves too many strange plot holes, but maybe you're not taking something very important into account, and that is: "the game is in alpha state."
These are pre-release versions that tell you from the beginning that it's not ready for final consumption.
I've been following the game since version 0.20.2, and I was surprised by how complete and complex all the systems were for such an early version. I've been watching it evolve with each version. Sprite changes, dialogue changes, interface changes, re-creating all scenes due to rendering issues, among other changes that add a lot or a little.
For now, just wait for the more polished versions. The author is trying to finish the main story before adjusting the side stories and correcting plot inconsistencies.
The dev isn’t the smartest man you could find. That was a good comment to see, I like seeing someone who isn’t just another brainwashed dummy.
Whoever downvoted you is just part of the same brainwashed crowd, so ignore them.
personally I like to play a complete game from story to art to gameplay to etc.. and seeing someone actually use their brain was a good change from the normal comments about people who can't play a game.
(NSFW/Adult Content) Warning: It seems that there is a single character that only needs three hearts instead of four in order to get pregnant...
Survey on the second floor.. Once you unlocked the nude uniform Why did you make it where he cannot use a low level Aura ability when doing a uniform check? And perhaps you can get laid?
Quite Girl (school library)... She isn't human, no way she can be, can't use any abilities on her in the library, Aura doesn't seem to effect her at all (she runs out of a room when you use it and try picking her, even Max authority at the college has no effect on her)
Yes, she is a strange girl, I hope that later on they at least explain her strange behavior.
Well that's annoying, I used the keyword at the Nexus clap (because I was thinking if whistle was then perhaps clap, snap, hum, sing, yell, moan) could also possibly be ones So I tried each of them got the whole nope sorry must not be a keyword message...only For the story to tell me the clap is one so apparently even if you can guess or figure out a keyword until it's the time in the story that it's supposed to be used it does you no good... Which brings up the question why they didn't just simply make it were you tap the button and if a "key" has been learned You can just tap the one you want versus having to type it in. Also would it hurt to make some of the buttons bigger like the back button maybe? I found it's very hard to cycle back at least on an Android device because of how small the button is more times than on you end up moving forward You have to be very very careful very very precise and push very very slowly otherwise there's a chance that yes it'll go back once but it'll immediately jump forward because the button doesn't reload fast enough.
This tight here is actually one of the stupidest things I've read during this game
He describes them as basically mindless dolls prior to using his ability, Yet he is concerned that somehow they may overwhelm his power that has easily overwhelmed people with actual personalities? So these two have the potential to be as much of a liability as a human like Lily or more so? Seriously they're going to overwhelm his power and break free despite already being basically mindless puppets?
I believe he's concerned that Luna's control over them could surpass his own. For example, as far as I can recall, he can't use control on anyone under the control of the Eldritch.
So... Command (I get why this might not work since it's supposedly does not work on magical creatures, despite the fact that the original version of it control did work on pixie which is obviously a magical creature) It doesn't explain why magic suppression doesn't work... After all if they Cupid is trying to use love "MAGIC" And you suppress it obviously it won't be able to affect you but again due to it not being at the point of the story where it might automatically kick in I'm not allowed to, So what's the purpose of even having the ability to click and use powers at will?
Okay.
Who's been clipping pixie wings?
I understand the fact that it's because of how I had the room decorated that triggered this event However it would have been nice if you would have still limited it to the actual date AKA October the 31st... However that said my bigger criticism is the fact that at this point I have the ability to make pixie human size meaning I could have easily used that turn her humanized and they would have just thought it was a pixie costume... In which case why would I need to go get her a costume?
Why would there be a love check for someone who is Awakened... By the most powerful version of it possible?
Organization members come to visit , When I have Emma, Hana and Ami inside However I do not have the option of shattering them both... I do not have any idea how they could possibly miss an entire wing separated from the rest of the house especially containing at least two fae... And if they're smart I'm pretty sure they can determine the half human half elemental such as Emma
eso lo han explicado. no, ellos no pueden identificar facilmente a los fey a menos que sean evidentemente no-humanos. y ellos suelen estar ocultos. incluso a cupido no pudieron encontrarla aunque sabian en donde estaban.
increiblemente la organizacion no es buena encontrandolos, e incluso dudo que sean buenos en capturarlos.
Here is another example of why I have a problem with this... Hidden voices, used when the chief officially offers you a place in the family
So you're saying that at this pivotal moment he's not thinking you know I hope he buys this? Or for the greater good? Or maybe even I think he could help us... It makes absolutely no sense that in a moment where a person is either legitimately making an offer or is planning subterfuge that they're not actually thinking about what they're actually doing...
I know this game has been out for a while I know you update this game and I thank you for that I really do but seriously I feel there are lots The places that you should have reevaluated during your updates and this is a glaring example
Oh look a Minotaur is trying to punch my face in... Surely I should hold back my most devastating attack because this is obviously not something where a last ditch effort would be beneficial???? I mean seriously wtf? A Minotaur trying to punch you in the face and kill you, it's still not enough of a perilous situation to consider shatter as a viable solution? That's just lazy writing.
Okay this criticism I..... Is absolutely necessary, What was going through your mind during this? Did you completely lose all sense of reality during the making of this particular bit?
So what is stopping me from getting a girl pregnant? i just wanna know what i have 2 do
Well it's story locked, first requisite is you have to have an affection level of 4, next you have to get to the point of the game where your insight has been risen and "energies" aligned.
stupid ass reason
Okay so I think I am at the end of Chapter 2 (Act 2, part 2?) and I was curious if there is anything that you can miss side quest, collectable or cutscene wise before entering the church? For example I still have the college side-quest to finish and I am missing a scene with the Rinkos (and the fourth Asteria one but I bet I missed that one in her story line).
Oh probably already mentioned somewhere below but, the menus need some work. Backing out of one of the my notes subpages should take you back to the my notes page not the game (or make it act like the settings menu or just line each along the top). Also I can't seem to leave the game to the main menu, only quit.
What gives? I can't talk yo the Lamia deapite having the following stats and wait until it was speaking and trying the hidden voices ability.. Further you might want to change the design of this page ever so slightly Right now the comments available on Windows, Android, macOS or Linux covers part of the field where a person would input their comment at least on the mobile version of the browser
I don't get this... We are told that failure means death, she summons a group of horny fairies to attack the MC... However if you try to use endure so you can actuallyallow them to get their freak on It says you're using a power that couldn't help you I rather take that power could help you and set it forces you to use a different power I honestly think it should have been optional which way you wanted to go by which power you picked, honestly I feel four different powers, could have been effectively used here against the bomb issue... Shatter (when her mind is shattered demand the correct wire to disarm the bomb), command (command her to tell which wire), endure, (place it around Lyx And let the bombs blow knowing it will protect her), And of course the one that is scripted to work correctly (No spoilers but if you're at this point I think it's fairly obvious what they want you to do)
More a question than a comment, at the pole dancing is it actually possible to get them naked but so far the farthest my character has asked even Chloe the one with shattered in effect to go is topless
MC was told that none of his powers would work on the fae.. his powers do work on the Fae, disregarding that just for the moment He's being told that his powers which originally can even work on the Fae cannot work on the Fae or anyone else who has been trained to resist them... (how would anyone in the entire world have had training to resist his brand new abilities to control people with a single word????? At most I can think of only 24 people before him that have that ability and I'm pretty sure that organization had not captured or studied all 24 of them otherwise I doubt they would be having any issue with him now). And I have noticed this throughout every time you try to listen to someone's thoughts 90% of the time If not higher they're not thinking anything in particular... despite the fact that obviously they are thinking because they're engaging in a conversation And last time I checked the majority of people do not empty headedly Just talk to someone in a coherent manner without thinking anything of what they're wanting to say, And don't get me started on control Oh sorry awaken now... prior to gaining awaken he was able to use his powers on people without knowing any of their desires but suddenly he needs to know them in order to use his power? It seems to me that each of these "upgrades" do nothing but limit him even more.
I will admit I was a bit disappointed that I could not present pixie to Morgana while she was pregnant I would have loved to have seen morgana's reaction especially with pixie obviously impregnated and bragging how she was wrong that someone can love her and more than that that she can be with him.
after MC was claimed as a forfit and made a member of her tribe ... And having been confessed to. Yet for some reason it's still not enough to get weight training?
also what's up with the this?
I mean after the first arm wrestling competition, she approaches her character starts carrying you off and says that as the winner she gets a forfeit from a member of her tribe and you say but I'm not a member of and she says yes you are... However here she says you're not?
For the love of wverything... Arm wrestling... Arm in pain.... "There's nothing to endure here"..... REALLY? I feel that entire competition He should have had the option of using endure the entire time
Endure requires concentration, I believe. It's hard enough to keep these women from slamming your hand down on the table.
Either way, Endure would just take away the pain, not the effort required. And pain produces adrenaline, which serves as a boon in this case.
characters most probably don't consider virgins Gwen (Due to her having a fiance, It is quite possible that she was the type that believed in no sex before marriage, Which is why she had hoped or a big strong man to be forceful with her), Lily (because she had a boyfriend, However the boyfriend even Tells the MC don't bother she's frigid meaning she never had sex with him outright and refused to, probably due to her obsession with maintaining her father's bar), Qarinah (due to her very nature of being a "Dream succubus", despite this fact no matter how many times she has had sex in a dream I sincerely doubt she interacted with humans or pretty much any species face to face generally speaking That being the case her physical body is most likely a virgins, The question becomes is a dream body able to physically impact a physical body as in if and a dream you're a female and you have your vagina penetrated does it tear your hymen in the real world The answer is no it doesn't, And to be honest there are a number of times that she tries to do nothing more than tease the main character, Only for him to Take over the dream and have sex with her anyway... In fact the very first time this happens is when he has sex with her she had teased him was about to leave and he's like you're not getting away... Since no one else has a kind of control over a dream there's every chance and likelihood that whenever anything got really close to sex she would just end the dream)
The first bit of the description says you are the hero or villain. You are the villain of this story. You are mind controlling all the ladies and to me, that falls under the purview of evil. DOesnt matter whether its Awaken or Shatter, you are mind controlling everyone so none of them are actually their true selves at all. One day i may choose to do nothing ut evil shit because its more fun than being a weak goody two shoes loser who cant do anything like 99%v of all hentai VN protags.
On a lighter note though, i wish the option to make every girl in the game, major or otherwise, go full nude as an outfit choice. Especially lil Pixie as im of the opinion that fairies should be completely nude instead of clothed.
On that note, can we maybe get the option sometime to get rid of the chains and such Pixie always has?
I agree it would be completely awesome if every female character in the game that you end up interacting with could be told hey you have to be naked all the time. No I must admit I do find something very confusing in the school where you can enforce a nudity outfit Veronica is still concerned that someone might catch you two going at it.
Very much a cool idea, but I'd appreciate if the intro was a bit slower, so we can get used to the characters more before twists happen. Makes the emotional impact more meaningful.
Also higher resolution on the images would do wonders
Love the game, probably my favorite gooner game, PLEASE let me turn down the text sound effects, It is SO LOUD. GG
I think it's just more annoying than loud... If you really don't want to hear it and you can always just turn down the volume of your phone but then that means you miss other sound effects and vocals during the singing with Emma...
Every time I need to update the game, I have to uninstall the previous version and install the latest one, which causes me to lose all my progress. I can’t access the save file normally using ZArchiver—it either says "Access denied" or shows "Copy completed with errors."
I’ve already tried using Shizuku, but it didn’t work. Some games store their save files in the Documents folder, which makes backup easier. Will this game eventually support that kind of storage system in the future?
Any help would be appreciated.
Unfortunately your problem isn't the game it's the fact that Android updated their operating system, They have effectively sandboxed each and every app on the phone to make sure they cannot directly interact with each other The only way at this point of time to have the functionality you're speaking of is either have the game developer put into the game the ability to export the save which Ren'py can and does support, try updating instead of uninstalling, or and I really cannot advise this one root your phone.
why does some characters chin so sharp that they look weird
Okay I'm not sure if anyone has pointed this out before but what were you thinking? Emma, music talent agent, pins her up against the wall and she can't get away? She literally toppled a freaking tree just by accidentally leaning into it but she couldn't push away a human being on her own? Had to have the main character save her? "I just knew you would save me" For clarification yes she says she's half human half elemental and unless she's touching the ground she doesn't weigh that much, However when she was in her apartment stumbling loud crashes were heard from her hitting into the walls and I'm pretty sure if a normal human especially a female that looks as small as she is was to hit into a wall there wouldn't be loud crashes... Meaning any solid ground whether it's the actual literal earth or the concrete floor or even a wood patio would be considered ground.
Also what is up with Lily? I ask her to wear the Casino outfit and when I go in she is, but when I talked to her about working she isn't she's wearing her normal outfit
They werent thinking. I personally woudl rathe rthe girls be capable of saving themselves. I dont care for damsels in distress. Makes the girls look pathetic and weak. I would rathe rthe girls be allowed to be strong, properly so.
If Emma can knock down a tree by leaning onto it, aint no man ever gonna pin her to anyhting. One flick and that person would be splattered all over the walls.